Sales Copy Critique

Hate Your Unresponsive Sales Copy?

Copywriter Of The Gurus Turns Your Stale Sales Letter In To A Cash Guzzling Profit Machine In 15 Minutes… Even If You Thought It Hopeless!

Stephen Dean

If you’ve been staring your sales copy down desperately trying to spot why it’s not working, then I’ve got the solution for you.

I know exactly how you feel. Seriously, I’ve been there many times. And now I’m dang good at clearly spotting the mistakes in sales copy and showing how to root them out.

It’s kind of like those “Magic Eye” drawings from the ’90’s. If it’s your first try it’s hard to spot the secret image behind the image… but once you have experience it’s easy.

I’ve got nearly 7 years of experience, and I can help.

Was Your Sales Copy Dead On Arrival?

Did you fork over good money for someone to create your sales letter? Are you ready for a top-tier copywriter to explain in plain language why your sales letter isn’t converting?

I can deliver step by step, easy to implement instructions for turning your stale sales copy in to a cash guzzling machine.

First I’ll dissect your sales letter off camera, taking notes as I do it… then I’ll record a 15-30 minute video critique explaining everything. I’ll email you a link to the video and even provide my notes so you can follow along and keep them handy for later.

Here’s just a sample of what I’m going to put your copy through…

  • Put your headline through a 4-point test… and write you a brand new one if it doesn’t pass.
  • Identify the portions of your letter that should say more… and which should say less.
  • Rearrange and mold your copy so it achieves the greased slide effect. (Meaning it reads almost effortlessly from top to bottom.)
  • Fix your guarantee so it doesn’t accidentally suggest that your product sucks.
  • Craft dynamite PS’s that make the sale.
  • And much, much more.

Once I’m done you’re going to be well on your way to copy that works like gangbusters.

It sure worked for Chris…

“Hey, Stephen!

“Quite a while ago you did a critique on my Killer Sales Video sales letter and it was excellent. People have been asking if I hired a $10k copywriter to do that. So thanks for the good job!”

~ Chris Willow
KillerSalesVideo.com

So here’s the deal…

For $199 I’ll deliver a 10-15 minute video critiquing your copy WITH notes to follow along.

I write copy starting at $2,500.00 per letter. And still, you can get this video critique for just $199 even.

To reserve your spot, click the link below to give Paypal your information. As soon as I get your payment I’ll be contacting you for more information.

Regular Price $299 Today $199

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If you have any questions, feel free to leave a comment or message me.

Cheers,
Stephen Dean

PS Wondering why I can spot the kinks in your sales copy other people can’t?

…because I’ve Mastered The Copywriting Craft…

In over 6 years I’ve completed more than 250 different projects.

David Garfinkel has hired me. Both Ryan Deiss and Jim Edwards have paid me thousands and thousands of dollars to write for them. Matt Bacak too.

(In fact, Ryan and Jim each invited me to fly across the country to their Internet Business seminars… one in Atlanta, one in Dallas… where they had me stand up in front of their paying audience to endorse my work.)

Here’s what my clients have to say about me…

“My conversion rate has skyrocketed…”

“I have two words about the sales letter. Mind blowing!”

“You’re a genius copywriter.”

“Business has been doing great. My conversion rate has skyrocketed ever since you wrote those sales letters for me. I can’t thank you enough for doing such a marvelous job.”

“You’re the first person I’m going to think about every time I start a new project that requires copywriting.”

Kaviraj Kodai,
UltimateMarketingCenter.com

And that’s just one of many testimonials. I hope you’ll be the next :) Click here to get started.

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